You got one this morning. “Hope you're doing well.” Then three paragraphs about them.
Paste it here. Every week we take the worst ones, strip the sender's name and company, and rewrite each the way one person would type it to another: open on something the recipient actually said, one line of connection, one small ask. Then we post the before and after.
The rewrite is the whole trick behind Hellofew. Reading it done by hand is the fastest way to decide whether you want it done for you.